NOTE: There is no foliage in the scene. This is just temporary will i do the surround area design, also there are a lot of large empty areas, the camera flies past theses areas quickly so please don't take much notice of them.
Finally after 1 month I've gotten enough time to make a new video! Please be aware that this video is mearly a proto-type. I will re-make it in due time when the surrounding area is more complete.
Please also be aware that because it is a proto-type the 2D video graphics aren't very good. Again when i re-create the video I will make video graphics to suit the video's and hey, I might even look for someone with a cool voice to voice it!
I know the camera is quite fast too, ill make sure it isn't when i re-make this video.
The story is applicable to change. No names are final.
Very impressive! One point of feedback; in your text you are throwing around quite a few names and locations the reader/viewer are unfamiliar with. If your goal for the video is to get players excited about playing your game you might want to try and make a "Call to Arms" rather than a history lesson.
The players that are interested in your back-story will be drawn to your site and will be eager to read what you've written.
thanks alot for the feedback, i really appriciate it :D. I agree, i was a little lost with this text, the way im going to be showing the story is kinda messed up at the moment veiwers are getting shown stuff backwards.
I wasn't going to make a video like this untill i had the other areas for other races finished so i could tell the rest of the story.